I will be honest,I've seen better and I think what you should change is basically most of the cast needs too be cut,there are too many characters which is a bad thing when you set up a series,since you can encounter problems regarding the story's plot,that and if you're still reading this,I think that the main problem was this was the animation,it looked well...kind of choppy at times,fix the fps too make it look more smooth and this is all critique btw